THE RACE
This is my first 55 fiction post , am no good in writing stories , yet let me give it a shot , here it goes :) :)
"They were both hungry . They were both naked . They both looked indigent.
They were both too week to run.But still they ran as fast as their legs could carry ,
towards that food packet lying near the dust bin .
The dog wins the race and gets its prize, the urchin pants haplessly in despair."
This is my first 55 fiction post , am no good in writing stories , yet let me give it a shot , here it goes :) :)
"They were both hungry . They were both naked . They both looked indigent.
They were both too week to run.But still they ran as fast as their legs could carry ,
towards that food packet lying near the dust bin .
The dog wins the race and gets its prize, the urchin pants haplessly in despair."
7 comments:
LOL :D
good attempt bro !
interesting beginning
hey that was pretty good ! 55 fiction is addictive . . looking forward to your next one..soon ;)
@Deepak : thnx bro , its you who started this lovely thing of 55 fiction :)
@maliny : thnx ,sure i would try :)
wow ! wonder why I didn't discover this blog earlier. very inspiring.
Glad to have found you at Indiblogger. Your newest follower and a regular visitor now.
cheers
Kaja
Thanx Kalal pleasure entirely mine , keep visiting........and i dnt have to say this but still u 2 r a grt blogger..thnx for visiting :) cheers
This is the nicest that I have read these kind of stories so far.
@vanderloost : thnku :)
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