THE HONEST LIES

THE HONEST LIE


Tear drops roll down my eyes,
As soulmates bid goodbyes.....
The Secret remains buried deep within.......
The untold HONEST Lie........



Bonded by the thread of love, separated by destiny .......
Treading life's boulevard of uncertainty ......
The Secret lies buried deep within.....
The untold HONEST Lie........


Two hearts which blossomed under the moonlit sky.....
blown apart by the gusty storm of time......
never to be one again and fly high........
The Secret lies buried deep within.....
The untold HONEST Lie........


Every single breath of mine , in every single vein ....
She is the princess whose love reigns....
But my fragile body wont stand long, soon will depart.........
 Never can I see her in pain.........
had to resort to that honest lie to set us apart.........
that HONEST LIE: My love was not true , I can never be your again...........


by saikatmbka





 ps:well the poetry actually is about the boy who suffers from leukemia , and madly loves a princes who too love him very much..its a story about their seperation..

30 comments:

Panchali said...

Saikat,
How sad! :((
This is a beautiful, yet heart wrenching piece!! This is one of those poems that helps us see the goodness in human beings in this chaotic world.
ah, life takes many twists and turns. But, lies complicate issues... that's what I feel.
a very touching piece! Beautifully penned:)

saikat mbka ghosh said...

yup indeed a sad account,
thnkx for appreciating my work :)

Soham Roy said...

This is neat and really nice...I am not a particular poetry enthusiast..But this piece of yours did strike a chord..Great one :)

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@soham :thnku very much :)

alka narula said...

beautifully penned ...painful , the irony of life we cant change the destiny !

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@Alka : thanku sooo very much for appreciating u guys a pro , getting a feed back is really treasured thnx a ton :)

debajyoti said...

this is a brilliantly written piece!!! every single line is exceptional!!

Ranita Sinha said...

So wonderfully presented..touched the heart..it is called destiny..very painful..

jaish_vats said...

Touching Saikat!

Akshay Kumar G said...

Very beautiful and touching tale.

Ghazala Hossain said...

Hey, let secrets melt and lovers unite :)
Lovely emotional lines~

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@ranita @deb @akshay @ghazala nd @jaish : thanku soo much :)

Saru Singhal said...

You have beautifully narrated a poignant tale of love. Sometimes I wish few posts are fictional...:(

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@saru: lucky this one is fictional :) thnx a lot for yr appreciation :)

TTT said...

brilliant ! its so touching ...

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@TTT : thnku :)

AmitAag said...

Hey Saikat...such a brilliant piece! A lovely poem indeed..deep and touching..loved it!!

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@amit ji :thnk u :)

Ashwini C N said...

Wonderful poem. Often,it hurts to face the inevitable truth, but that is the harsh reality of life.

Pooja Kopargaonkar said...

beautiful poem, touched my heart

Rajrupa Gupta said...

This is beautiful... reality of life! Such painful things happen around us!

Saru Singhal said...

Very beautifully written. The pain and the longing of hearts is portrayed effectively. Each paragraph stands out!

Jay Singh said...

Really good imagination Saikat :)
Weaving a complete story that too in poetic fashion is commendable.
How did you come to select Leukemia as the theme for the poetry?
Keep posting Saikat :)

Regards

Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

Sri Valli said...

That is so sad and touching! A perfect situation where the lie can be honest....Beautifully penned!

http://shilp3005.blog.com said...

a touching poem with a sad end, well done Saikat

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@pooja,@rajrupa,@saru,@shilpi,@jay : all thnku so much :)

@JAY : hmm well i dnt knw just like dat :)

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@ashwini nd @valli:thnku :)

vanderloost said...

Nice

saikat mbka ghosh said...

@geeta : thnku :)

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