THE HONEST LIE
Tear drops roll down my eyes,
As soulmates bid goodbyes.....
The Secret remains buried deep within.......
The untold HONEST Lie........
Bonded by the thread of love, separated by destiny .......
Treading life's boulevard of uncertainty ......
The Secret lies buried deep within.....
The untold HONEST Lie........
Two hearts which blossomed under the moonlit sky.....
blown apart by the gusty storm of time......
never to be one again and fly high........
The Secret lies buried deep within.....
The untold HONEST Lie........
Every single breath of mine , in every single vein ....
She is the princess whose love reigns....
But my fragile body wont stand long, soon will depart.........
Never can I see her in pain.........
had to resort to that honest lie to set us apart.........
that HONEST LIE: My love was not true , I can never be your again...........
by saikatmbka
ps:well the poetry actually is about the boy who suffers from leukemia , and madly loves a princes who too love him very much..its a story about their seperation..
37 comments:
Saikat,
How sad! :((
This is a beautiful, yet heart wrenching piece!! This is one of those poems that helps us see the goodness in human beings in this chaotic world.
ah, life takes many twists and turns. But, lies complicate issues... that's what I feel.
a very touching piece! Beautifully penned:)
yup indeed a sad account,
thnkx for appreciating my work :)
This is neat and really nice...I am not a particular poetry enthusiast..But this piece of yours did strike a chord..Great one :)
@soham :thnku very much :)
beautifully penned ...painful , the irony of life we cant change the destiny !
@Alka : thanku sooo very much for appreciating u guys a pro , getting a feed back is really treasured thnx a ton :)
this is a brilliantly written piece!!! every single line is exceptional!!
So wonderfully presented..touched the heart..it is called destiny..very painful..
Touching Saikat!
Very beautiful and touching tale.
Hey, let secrets melt and lovers unite :)
Lovely emotional lines~
@ranita @deb @akshay @ghazala nd @jaish : thanku soo much :)
You have beautifully narrated a poignant tale of love. Sometimes I wish few posts are fictional...:(
@saru: lucky this one is fictional :) thnx a lot for yr appreciation :)
brilliant ! its so touching ...
@TTT : thnku :)
Hey Saikat...such a brilliant piece! A lovely poem indeed..deep and touching..loved it!!
@amit ji :thnk u :)
beautiful poem, touched my heart
This is beautiful... reality of life! Such painful things happen around us!
Very beautifully written. The pain and the longing of hearts is portrayed effectively. Each paragraph stands out!
Really good imagination Saikat :)
Weaving a complete story that too in poetic fashion is commendable.
How did you come to select Leukemia as the theme for the poetry?
Keep posting Saikat :)
Regards
Jay
http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/
That is so sad and touching! A perfect situation where the lie can be honest....Beautifully penned!
a touching poem with a sad end, well done Saikat
@pooja,@rajrupa,@saru,@shilpi,@jay : all thnku so much :)
@JAY : hmm well i dnt knw just like dat :)
@ashwini nd @valli:thnku :)
@geeta : thnku :)
Thanks for sharing your info. I really appreciate your efforts and I am waiting for your next write ups thank you once again.
sengangat terus ngeblognya mazz..
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